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01 December 2006 @ 03:10 pm
So Much Mine: Section Twenty-Seven  
Section Twenty-Seven

Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Overall NC-17. This section HAS some explicit content.
ranalore really does deserve a lot of credit for this fic. it began in an IM between me and her.
Summary: The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section.

Previous Sections:
One; Two; Three; Four; Five; Six; Seven; Eight; Nine; Ten; Eleven; Twelve; Thirteen; Fourteen; Fifteen; Sixteen; Seventeen; Eighteen; Nineteen; Twenty; Twenty-One; Twenty-Two; Twenty-Three; Twenty-Four; Twenty-Five; Twenty-Six

Section Twenty-SevenCollapse )
 
 
... i miss hearing you breathe   ♥  lav bunnytumi18 on December 2nd, 2006 02:50 pm (UTC)
im reading it again and i cant help not to cry...
the scene was just so sweet.. so perfect for them...
yunho telling jaejoong all that was just..... perfect...

You are in my soul.”

*dies* perfect way to end it all...
now i cant wait for the next one..
i hope you post it soon
reading this before going to work makes my day ♥♥
... i miss hearing you breathe   ♥  lav bunnytumi18 on December 2nd, 2006 02:56 pm (UTC)
oppssss.. i clicked the wrong button... instead of reply
i pressed post new comment
=_______= sleepy sleepy >.
(no subject) - wedspawn on December 2nd, 2006 04:45 pm (UTC) (Expand)
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on December 2nd, 2006 04:43 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ why thank you... that is so sweet! i am glad you liked it.

i needed to have them.. talk...and explore their feelings. it was so important to the story and their relationship. i wanted the reader... you... to feel that commitment they have for one another. that is so vital.

i will be posting a section today. i started it last night because i have to game tonight and won't be able to spend a lot of time on it in the evening. so i had to get ahead a bit. hopefully i'll have it finished before 6 pm california time :)

thank you again for reading! ♥♥♥ yeah i know i say that a lot :) but thanks!
주황 여자: yunjaekahel_luna on December 2nd, 2006 05:17 pm (UTC)
i'm gone for two days for vacation and i've got a nice surprise waiting for me. ~

when i read this section my heart flew and it left me literally breathless. i had tears, i swear. i had to walk over around our house twice to keep my sanity afloat. and then i had to finish my list of to-dos before leaving a comment. it's because you probably won't understand me when i didn't, i would've just left something like an ellipsis if I didn't. XD

but i want you to know i truly appreciate your fluff. just like your angst, it wins. it makes my heart stopped beating only to beat faster after. ♥ you win, let's be friends to make this a forever thing as well?? haha. *pledges self as your fangirl* XD
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on December 2nd, 2006 05:29 pm (UTC)
::::hugs:;: thank you. and i hope you had a nice vacation! :::grins:;:

i am glad you liked the schmoopy fluff love episode :) i shall definitely friend you.. because you're sweet :) i am so glad that you liked it. :)

i am seriously debating binding the whole thing as a small book. just to send out to people. i'll have to see how much it costs. i will be posting it as a whole PDF for people to have as one piece :)

thank you so much for reading and commenting! your interaction mans a great deal! ♥♥♥
(no subject) - kahel_luna on December 2nd, 2006 06:20 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - wedspawn on December 2nd, 2006 06:36 pm (UTC) (Expand)
[m8]: jaeho-concertmickey8 on December 2nd, 2006 06:52 pm (UTC)
simply romantic! everything spelled was so poetry and flowerly that i claimed dizziness but it's the best script anyone could've heard...

you've made their love complete and whole ... though it's kinda sad hearing it from YunHo that in a way..he has nothing left for him now.. except his heart and heat for Jae... but if that's what makes him complete.. let it be and who needs the rest?

finally... i see stars and bright shining moon over some silvery lines of clouds.. love's in the air and i enjoyed reading it as much as you enjoyed writing... *i'm in love* ^^
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on December 2nd, 2006 06:59 pm (UTC)
thank you! :::Grins::: i am so glad you liked it! and yes, flowery love :) all around! ::::hugs::::

yunho and jaejoong will be fine. i promise. thank you for reading! and commenting! i appreciate it.
아리사hosoi_koe on December 3rd, 2006 01:38 am (UTC)
Baaah! *catches up* THIS IS A GOOD ONE!
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on December 3rd, 2006 06:24 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ thank you! ♥♥♥ :::Grins::: i had to see where you were :) i liked this section :) ♥

i'm glad you did too!
젤민: prettychangminxiao_tian_jelly on December 3rd, 2006 08:02 pm (UTC)
“Since before we met, the thought of you…of someone like you helped me heal the breaks inside of me. You were there…it was just a matter of time before I knew your face…or your touch. But I knew you were there. You are in my soul.”

this is the best ending for a chap, IMHO. i'm dying from too much sweetness here. XD
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on December 3rd, 2006 11:52 pm (UTC)
oh...thank you. ♥♥♥ how very sweet of you to say! ♥♥

i am glad you liked it and thank you for reading! ♥
Bee Jayoldwillow_brook on February 10th, 2007 03:33 am (UTC)
I *sigh*...

This made my heart sing! LaLaLA! Ho can be so loveable at times...Jae..his always loveable...*starts singing Kim Jung Kook* I just can't get over Yunho's words about his parents and about how if they really trully loved him that they would have been there for him is so true. The thoughts of everything that I have ever thought you have summed up in this chapter. Oh you are just *squish* I lubbers you very much! ♥ ♥
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on February 10th, 2007 03:38 am (UTC)
oh... thank you! ::::hugs::: ♥♥♥♥

i'm glad you liked it!
thy_stalkerthy_stalker on June 4th, 2007 10:36 pm (UTC)
^__^ i love this story so far (i'm working on reading the rest of it <3) and XD i find it ironic that just as i was reading the end of this chapter, DBSKs version of "I Knew I Loved You" started playing on my playlist hehe
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on June 4th, 2007 10:39 pm (UTC)
ah, ::::hugs::: hello! i am glad you found SMM :) And that is very ironic! ::::waves dbsk flag:: i hope you enjoy the rest of it. and thank you again!