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12 November 2006 @ 03:18 pm
The nights are cold when I want you (5/5)  
Because I love the people who comment on my story!!! :D!!! It makes me more 'confident' to write something! Which makes me want to write more fanfiction! woohoo!

Title: The nights are cold when I want you
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings: Jaeho and a mention of another..
Rating: PG-13 (bit)
Summary: Jaejoong has trouble with sleepwalking and being cold…(it's probably different
than what you expect it will be :} ...~).

Comment: Last! :( But I'm working on a new fanfiction. Most is inside my head, but a piece of it is

on paper already! I think it will be a one-shot..or a 2-chapter story.

Dammit..I neglected my homework AGAIN XD.. 






Recap: 'I wonder how Jaejoong will react in the morning...'
 
'1.....2......3...NOW...'
 
'1.....2.....3..now!'
 
'GAh'
 
'1....2....I can't...'
 
'Okay Jaejoong..just ..open your eyes. NOW.'
 
'Dammit.. I can't..'
 
'It's probably just your imagination. You are NOT lying against someone's naked chest with your legs wrapped between that persons legs. Nope. You are not. So just open..your eyes.'
 
'1...2...3..' he opened his eyes. He could barely see anything, his face was lying on someone's shoulder, with his head tucked beneath someon elses head. 'Note to self, do not, I repeat, do NOT listen to your conciousness.' Someone groaned softly.
 
'Wait a second. I know that groan. There's only one person that can groan so sensiously..Yunnie-ah!' he lifted his head from Yunho's shoulder and looked at his face. "Ah ..Yunho." his eyes opened slowly. "Jaejoong? Ah! Are you okay?!" he looked worried.
 
"What do you mean?"
 
"You can't remember? You were outside the front door, probably for more than 2 hours."
 
"What?" trying not to become hectic, so that he could stay on top of Yunho. He could get used to lying like this. "But..wait! I remember! I remember waking up outside the front door because of the cold!"
 
"But you never woke up the other times, because you were cold..."
 
"Oh." Jaejoong's face went still and concern was all over his face. "I think..I did it on purpose."
 
"What? Go outside?"
 
"That too. But. Yunho, I think I get it now."
 
"Why you were outside?"
 
"Yes.. Yunho..I .." he knew this was going to be awkward so Jaejoong lifted himself off of Yunho, but was grabbed by his shoulders and pushed back on top of Yunho. His head once again on Yunho, but now on his chest.
 
"You're not going anywhere. You'll have to tell me first, whatever it is that you want to say...I don't care."
 
"You will.. and you'll push me off of you and.."
 
"I won't..now tell me!" Yunho was getting anxious to know and wrapped his arms around Jaejoong keeping him close. He could feel his hyung's now warm breath tickling him.
 
"I think that, I kept going outside on the balcony, so that I would GET cold. On purpose. My mind worked on it's own. I think I just hoped that you would come and warm me up..."
 
"Jaejoong-ah..."
 
"Wait..I'm not done yet." 'He's not releasing his grip on me. Which means...?' "I was a bit angry..no..pissed off yesterday. During that photoshoot, remember?"
 
"Yes.."
 
Jaejoong averted his eyes down to where Yunho's hand was on his body. It was still there. So it was safe to go on. "I think I was so upset that I didn't even wanted you to find me outside. But this time I woke up by myself, because it was just getting way too cold." he paused. "and.. when I woke up, the door was locked, and my lungs were so cold that I couldn't call you guys out."
 
"Tried the doorbell?" Jaejoong looked up. Yunho was grinning.
 
"I think my brain froose as well." he giggled.
 
"Why did you want ..no, why DO you want me to warm you up Jaejoongie?" Yunho slid one of his hands along Jaejoongs arm up to his neck and rested it on his cheek. He stroked it.
 
"I ...Saranghae..Yunho." just as Jaejoong finished that sentence, Yunho answered, "well now that thát's finaly out...me too Joongie..me too." He pulled Jaejoong's face up with both his hands and looked in his eyes. He could see that he was about to cry. "Don't cry BooJae.." he kissed him on his lips, starting out tender. But when Jaejoong started to react to the kiss, it became more fierce and heated. "Ah..Yunnie..." maybe a bit too heated.
 
Yunho's hands traveled towards Jaejoong's shoulders, towards his waist, passing his hipbones and coming to rest on his ass. "You have a thing for cheeks?" Jaejoong practicaly moaned out when he stopped the kiss.
 
"All of them... as long as they are yours.." he pulled Jaejoong back for another kiss which was even more pasionate as the first. "Oh god.." if they didn't stop now, they'd be having sex right there...
 
"GAH MY EYES..!!!"
 
Yunho and Jaejoong quickly stopped with their kissing, roaming and grabbing and looked up to see Junsu holding a hand before his eyes and holding the other out in front of him, trying to get to the kitchen without seeing any other Jaeho scenes.
 
Then they saw Changmin coming throught the door opening. "Ahhh so cute!!!"
 
"Says the Dong Bang Shin Ki's cutest member." Yoochun came after him and patted Changmin on his back.
 
"I'm not cute..I'm hot."
 
"Whatever Minnie." he slapped Changmin's butt and made his way towards the kitchen, "Whenever you guys are ready with cuddling, come to have breakfst will you?" and dissapeared inside said kitchen.
 
Changmin was still staring blankly..."did he just..."
 
"Yes" Yunho said synchronicly with Jaejoong. Once Changmin ran after Yoochun, Jaejoong presumed his activities with Yunho. "I think we'll need a seperate bedroom.." giggles...
 
"NOOO CHANGMIN NOT MY ASS....GAAAAH"
 
Laughter filled the Dong Bang Shin Ki house as they lived happily ever after. Jaeho had lots of kids and Jaejoong kept his figure! XD
 
::::End::::
 
 
Current Location: Holland
Current Mood: busybusy
Current Music: DBSK - The story has just begun
 
 
The little papayarose_forever on November 12th, 2006 02:25 pm (UTC)
FIRSTTTTTTTTTTTT...
I'm so damn lucky today XD.
Brb with comment.
The little papayarose_forever on November 12th, 2006 02:32 pm (UTC)
Ahaha, that's so cute. Jaejoong is really mischievious; he get cold on purpose lolz. Although their confession is a bit rushing but I still like it :D. Hehe, any happy Jaeho moments are like drugs to me XD.

OMG, YooMin in the end XD... Disturbing. Just kidding! I found that funnehhhh of Changmin. The babe of DBSK is alaways weird in DBSK fanfics lolz.

THe last line cracked me up. Is it possible for Joongie to have kids? XDDDDDD.

Thanks for your story. That's so lovely.
hushed_rose on November 12th, 2006 03:09 pm (UTC)
Lol, this was the best chapter! JaeHo kiddies *giggles* too, too adorable^^. Lol, and Changmin's so cute with his "I'm not cute..I'm hot." Lol, you're both, Minnie! Hahahaha and the "NOOO CHANGMIN NOT MY ASS....GAAAAH" of Yoochun had me in fits. Junnie's cute too *pinches his cheek (facial cheek *wink*)*. Awww, but I can't believe this is finished T_T- you'll be writing more soon, right???? Please???
hydeist89 on November 12th, 2006 03:51 pm (UTC)
see the comment in the beginning..I'm busy on another Jaeho story.. I think it's going to be less humor, more drama though..
wednesday childewedschilde on November 12th, 2006 06:24 pm (UTC)
that was so very cute and sweet. very nicely done and the right amount of humour. you can really see their personalities. :)
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wednesday childewedschilde on November 12th, 2006 07:29 pm (UTC)
no. i think it works. :) thank you!
Lavena 윤재: 7lavhire on November 12th, 2006 09:16 pm (UTC)
LOL ... OMG FUNNIE.. the ending was NICE but a lil' bit rush haha but CUTE. CUTE FIC ALL THE WAY.. awww jongie wants yunnie to warm him up XD
cymrutvxqninomiya_arashi on November 12th, 2006 09:24 pm (UTC)
Nooo! I didnt want it to end!:(

But it was all awesome! Jae is so cute,faking the coldness!XD
soo sweet!I loved it!^^
hydeist89 on November 12th, 2006 09:45 pm (UTC)
he wasn't faking..XD he wás cold.. but well..ehm..how to explain it in short.. Jae made himself get cold.., but not consciously... and etc.. XD

~Thank youuuu!
Bee Jayoldwillow_brook on November 13th, 2006 02:27 am (UTC)
Aww jae jae *hugs jae* Wait what am I doing?! *hand jae to yunnie * HAVE FUN!!!

This was too funny and great and ahhh no word is making enough meaning to make my comment good enough...Its soo freakin good...So sad it ended...*tear* At least you have another one coming up! you should totally continue writing. Your writing is so awesomly perfect. *sigh* I wish I could write like you!

I'm not cute..I'm hot."

"Whatever Minnie." he slapped Changmin's butt and made his way towards the kitchen,

For some reason I can completely and utterly see this happen. Minnie standing feet apart hands on waist trying to act hot and Yoochun soo used to it just blows it off.. So I'm guessing you noticed as well how freakin abusive changmin is to micky? LOL!
hydeist89 on November 13th, 2006 08:41 am (UTC)
O_O..PERFECT?.. you mean pervert right?...XD you mistyped..I swear! You must have! XD.. I always just pass my english essays and writing-assignments..lmao.. there must be a thousand mistakes (wait..500 .. this doesn't even have 1000 words..XD)up there! *rolls over*..

*still dies from your loving comments*~ <3~!!!

Minnie would soooooo say that..and Micky would soooo do that in my mind XD.. and then it would escalate..XD To Minnie doing even worse things to Mickyyy XD...That's where Disney is for..
Bee Jayoldwillow_brook on November 14th, 2006 05:24 am (UTC)
Perfect.. pervert...There in the same category. To me it doesn't matter if you fail or pass an english essay writing assignment as long as you write from the heart no english teacher can corrupt it...*grins* I sound all intellectual...LOL!

I'm presuming you are a MinYoo shipper? And I had to ask my friend just for reassurence if min was on top here, I think he was but double check is best right? we don't want yoonnie dominant all the time do we? XDDD (now whos being perverted!XDDD)
minjin20 on November 13th, 2006 01:33 pm (UTC)
muahahahahah oh yes jeje you did right!!!Thats a good strategy to take yuno in your arms XD!!! Im happy that they are together now!!! Ande have a lots of babies *_*

good story *_* and well written ^^
Le' Suryazerotrigeal on November 14th, 2006 11:03 am (UTC)
He exchanges his own health just for Yunnie's warmth!!
Omoooo..
Though it will hurt you physically but you did right! Yes, so right! I'll give you 100 for this... XDD *just sounded like my teacherXDD*