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11 November 2006 @ 09:57 pm
So Much Mine: Section Six  
Title: So Much Mine
Author: wedspawn
Genre: Slash/Relationship
Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: NC-17 (Mature Content Included)
Jaeho Pimpage and Beta: ranalore
Summary: Section Six.
The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section.

Section One; Section Two; Section Three; Section Four; Section Five


Section SixCollapse )
 
 
Current Music: VAST: pretty when you cry
 
 
J.B.juicybo0 on November 12th, 2006 11:07 pm (UTC)
i still don't get how yoochun can say all that to jaeho... i mean he was there with yunho wen yunho was scared about jaejoong and wanted to protect him and was so worried about him i mean YOOCHUN WAS THERE!! and hes telling jaejoong that he'll get his heart broken... : ((((( is yoochun trying to still jae away??
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 13th, 2006 02:29 am (UTC)
ah. yoochun knows it's not his place to interfere with how yunho and jae are. ::grins::: chunnie just wants jae to be careful... to be careful with his heart. sometimes when you love, things aren't easy... and you do have to be careful. i am sure yoochun wants jae to be happy... he just wants jae not to get hurt. yunho hasn't admitted his feelings yet so everyone has to be careful with their hearts at the moment. :)

hang in there. i'm sure it'll work out.
^O^malaciae on November 15th, 2006 04:20 am (UTC)
I love the...descriptiveness of the shower scene XD

Yoochun's too perfect in this, everything seems to come out because of him. The conversation between him and Jae is so bittersweet. It definately feels like a real conversation between BFFs.

And, yet again, the last line is the most powerful <3 :D
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 15th, 2006 05:17 am (UTC)
thank you. :::Grins::: i wanted to portray chun and jae's relationship as real. so hopefully i can carry through. with any luck, i can keep the story engaging for you! thank you for reading! ♥♥♥
[m8]mickey8 on November 18th, 2006 12:55 pm (UTC)
beautiful!

*carry on reading*
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 18th, 2006 05:01 pm (UTC)
thank you! carry on!
xpale_opacity on November 24th, 2006 06:54 am (UTC)
HAH. I told myself I'd read two chapters and go to bed because it's late (and I have to wake up early) but that sure didn't happen. ♥

This fiction is just beyond incredible. It's been a while since I've read a fanfic that has me at the edge of my seat, and holding back tears. The description is vivid, almost too vivid, that I'm able to imagine each and every sentence. The angst is real, as in it can definitely happen in real life, even to Jaejoong; and Yunho's temper flares just adds to the drama of the story. It just pains me when Yunho yells at Jaejoong on his flaws, that I want to punch him in the face like Jaejoong did, but...like it's just too amazing that I can't. Oh my goodness, I'm rambling and I'm incoherent and just overwhelmed. ♥

The shower scene was stunning. The whole "his shampoo" theme perfectly described how much Jaejoong loved Yunho.

I love the platonic friendship between Yoochun and Jaejoong. The way Yoochun talks to Jaejoong makes me wonder if his relationship with Jaejoong is actually beyond that of a friendship. That he wants Jaejoong to be happy so he can be satisfied with knowing he's happy. Just a thought--I'll have to read the rest. ;)

Although I can quote this whole story, the last thing Jaejoong said in this chapter touched me.
Jae’s voice was very small in his throat, caught on the fear overwhelming him. “What if he doesn’t love me? What if he can’t?”
It was so sad to hear those words pass his lips. The doubt that Jaejoong felt when he said that stabbed me right in the heart.

I hope to continue reading this when I come back home tomorrow. Honestly, you have my guarantee that I'm in love with this fic. ♥♥♥
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 24th, 2006 07:17 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ why thank you! ♥♥♥♥ i am so happy you are reading along :) i am grateful for your admiration. it is so complimentary. you have a long way to go! i have just posted 19. i hope you find the rest of them enjoyable.

i wanted this fic to have a sense of realism about it. i do explore the reasons for yunho and jaejoong's affections and angst. and this is a jaeho. :) i promise.

yoochun will have his own worries. trust me :::Grins::: i am thrilled the emotions of the characters reached you. that is so exciting to hear. ♥♥

i say that a lot :) :::grins::: let me know how you like the rest of it. and welcome to the fanfic! i am so glad you're here. ♥♥
Bee Jayoldwillow_brook on February 4th, 2007 08:31 am (UTC)
Oh I love this Yoochun...Oh I do. Usually his the meanie of the group but I just adore him...You make the plotline and characters seem like someone else in the band is writing it. Like its not made up but its happened. Oh...This is soo good..

I won't download it because its easier to read then comment then going back and forth from the wordperfect and trying to find what chapter I'm on...Its easier for me!
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on February 4th, 2007 05:11 pm (UTC)
::::hugs::: thank you. it's interesting to hear from someone reading from the start to the finish. i'm always interested in seeing what different people pull from the story as they go along :) it helps me as a writer.

i am glad you liked it. and yes, yoochun is.. very sensitive... and goofy. i'm trying to portray him in that vein :) :::hugs:::
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on December 27th, 2007 12:23 am (UTC)
Sweet
“Then I’ll be there until you can’t cry anymore.” Micky promised, pulling Jae back and hugging the singer tight against his chest. They lay there, back to stomach while Jae swallowed at the truth in Yoochun’s words. “I promise, Jaejoong. I won’t let you cry alone.”

I really love that part.
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on December 27th, 2007 02:56 am (UTC)
Re: Sweet
aw, thank you. smooches. thank you! :::offers cookies:::