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06 November 2006 @ 10:33 pm
So Much Mine: Impending Jaeho  
Title: So Much Mine
Author: Wedspawn
Genre: Slash/Relationship
Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Eventually NC-17
Beta and Title Gifter: Ranalore
Summary: Section One. The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section.

A drop of sweat caught a flash of pulsating light as it trembled on the young Korean’s curved jaw. The driving thump of a bass line vibrated the floor beneath his feet, shuddering the catwalk he’d shimmied onto. Ripples of shadow marbled the laminated sign hanging from the velvet rope that barred the entrance to the walk, warning men that the steel grating was strictly for the female dancers. Jaejoong ignored the sign, curving his lithe body around the wide bouncer, tossing off a charming smile. The man’s broad hand slipped under the rise of Jae’s thighs, cupping at the warmth of the young man’s ass for a brief moment before helping Jaejoong over the velvet rope.

Jae let the press of fingers slide along the inseam of his pants, ignoring the rise of sick in the back of his mouth. The lemon soju he’d tossed back earlier still burned his tender throat, nearly raw from the hours he’d spent practicing. Its potent sting did little to dull the ache beneath his breast bone, a curl of tender pain nothing seemed to ease. The faces around him swam into a paisley sea of pale adoration and sparkling fabrics. Hip hop beat out of the club’s overhead speakers, drowning out any chance of Jae overhearing the murmur of voices around him. Throwing his face back, he inhaled deeply, drawing into his lungs what little cold air the vents were pushing out.

Nothing mattered in the space of that breath, the music pounding through him, an abusive lover he’d found lurking in the dark corners of a dance club. Jae’s body was wound tight, taut muscles bunching beneath his thin white shirt, the cloth soaked transparent from his sweat. The primal drumbeat behind the music called to his blood, his lean body curving onto itself as he hooded his dark eyes, driving the crowd around him further back into the haze of alcohol and need that crawled beneath his skin.

The woman dancing next to him edged closer, her hips twitching seductively as she circled around Jae’s writhing body. Her hands were hot on his shoulders when she finally worked her way in, blood-red fingernails vibrant on Jae’s pale skin. He twisted, face closed off as she tried again. Jaejoong debated for a moment, at war with the anguish in his heart and the deaden weight in his belly. It would be easy to fall into her moist heat, lost in the velvet of a woman’s touch but the dancer’s musky scent left him cold.. a flatness he could taste on the back of his tongue, mingled in with the fumes of the potent soju.

His legs were beginning to ache, a familiar strain in his knee. Jae glanced down at the girl, drawn back in horror at the lust in her face, a scarlet painted mouth whispering his name in a soundless moan. The music shifted, something deeper in emotion rising from the depths of someone else’s lost love.

He caught the sob before it escaped from his full mouth, sharp white teeth digging into his lower lip. Jae swore that he wouldn’t cry… that he wouldn’t let the need he couldn’t chase away with alcohol or exhaustion. The skin on his belly tingled, remembering Yunho’s touch. Their practice session devolved into a shouting match when that touch… that single skimming of fingertips over the low-rise of Jae’s jeans brought him to a standstill.

Jaejoong’s hands found that same spot, curling over the flesh and closing his eyes. Yunho’s sharp words echoed, lost in a loop until all Jae could hear was the admonishment. Each drop of sound drowned out the world, pushing the club’s ear-splitting raucous to the background. His overheated body responding to Yunho’s touch feuded with the heart-sickening spitting disgust the group’s leader shouted at him when he stumbled. Each time he failed, Yunho’s eyes hardened and Jae drove himself further into the depths of his misery.

Club NB staff had grown used to the singer sliding past the main door, a hooded sweatshirt pulled down over his too-pretty face. The bouncers had long waived the 15,000 won cover charge, whispering to the attractive woman that the lead singer of TVfxQ often fell into a dancing trance on the catwalks, stalking free of the steel panels with a thirst for alcohol. They giggled behind raised hands when he smiled at them, a bright plastic beacon of reassurance when he motioned to the pourers that his shot glass was empty.

A hand reached through the haze, familiar and intimate. The females-only rule, broken only by the lithe, heartbroken male beauty who sought solace in the music, had been violated by another. Standing at the crux of two panels, Yunho stood against the light, a corona of red flaring behind him. The stage lights shifted, dousing black then rising into yellow bands rippling over the Korean man’s coldly stern face.

Fingers gripped tight on Jae’s upper arm, digging deep into the tender flesh. With a yank, Yunho dragged at the young singer, ignoring the feminine yelps of outrage when he muscled through the catwalk two-deep in women. Stronger of the two, Yunho felt Jaejoong’s initial resistance, pulling harder as the other singer dug his heels into the ridge of the catwalk’s partitions.

“I’ve had enough of this, Kim Jaejoong.” Yunho kept walking, Jae’s struggles barely noticeable in his ire. “Don’t fight me, Jaejoong. We’re going home.”
``크리시``kroongho on November 7th, 2006 06:55 am (UTC)
sdflkgjsdlfgjsdfl;ghkjsdf;glksdjh;sdghj OMGOMG I LOVE IT.

Another one to stalk.
The description is hot as hell, I tell you. :O
And I am going to patiently wait for the next one. (which will come out hopefully quickly ;_;)
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:09 pm (UTC)
thank you. i am glad you liked it. i'll try to post new sections as i get them done.
wandererwanderingreen on November 7th, 2006 06:57 am (UTC)
god. reading that was so...hypnotic?? oO. the way you describe things...really makes the whole situation unreal.

gyaa and my heart ached for jaejae. really. are they even together here? or is it one-sided?

*hops impatiently for the next chap*
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:19 pm (UTC)
i can tell you that they're not together right now. as for being one-sided... that i don't know. i'm leaning towards a no that it's not one sided but there are definitely issues.
ねこさと♥malyntine on November 7th, 2006 07:21 am (UTC)

Womg but poor depressed Jae, and what are those lust-crazed girls trying to do to him?!!! :X
みっちゃんblu_olivz on November 7th, 2006 07:24 am (UTC)
Angry Yunho is HOT ♥

as is the hopefully impending angry jaeho makeup sex xDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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a place for my head.: jaeho-OTPhyungie on November 7th, 2006 07:23 am (UTC)

you've got a great vocab, dude. i had to check my dictionary to find out what admonishment means. ahahahahaha!

i ish stupid, i ish know. :P

but holyfrap. sexy as hell. i love how detailed your sentences and all the msystery behind the scene.

please continue soon!!!

*grabs popcorn*

みっちゃんblu_olivz on November 7th, 2006 08:20 am (UTC)
xD what a great icon xDDD
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^O^malaciae on November 7th, 2006 07:50 am (UTC)
I love this. The imagery is absolutely hypnotic, and the emotion resonates beautifully. It's not overwritten, but it doesn't feel rushed either. I'm hooked already :D
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:22 pm (UTC)
i'm hoping not to rush. i like character-driven storylines. i needed something to jump start my brain on another and figured jaeho would be a good prod to the brain cells.
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Naru-chanuchihanaruto on November 7th, 2006 09:01 am (UTC)

Why did you stop there? T_______________T
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:25 pm (UTC)
why did i stop there? well, because it seemed like a good place to stop. also, i had to get some sleep. i wake up very early in the morning to go to work :)
bellasurus on November 7th, 2006 11:10 am (UTC)
laskjghdslkfgjhdsflkgjhdsf OMG HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT. *is dead*

my heart hurts for jaejae T_T. i bet ho will be mean to him when they get home *bawls* and jaejae will angst more because ho doesn't reciprocate...TT___TT

having said that, do update soon <3.
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:26 pm (UTC)
yeah, i'm thinking jae and yunho are probably going to take a bit of work. i'll see how they go.
Sunsick Puppysunsick_puppy on November 7th, 2006 01:45 pm (UTC)
whoo!! please let this not be a one-shot!! *crosses fingers* oh~~~~~give me angst galore!!
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:26 pm (UTC)
no. it probably won't be a one-shot. i'm guessing a few at least. i'm hoping for about 800 words a pass. i just don't know where it's going to be going.
minjin20 on November 7th, 2006 02:21 pm (UTC)
HOT!! I love angry Yunho!! And i so love ANGST!! You have me captured with your choose of words, you described it so beautiful *_*

wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:28 pm (UTC)
thank you. i hope that you like it. i hope to get the boys going forward and into something of a relationship. we'll see.
hydeist89 on November 7th, 2006 02:31 pm (UTC)
omg omg moooore!! :D Great potentional in the plot!!! :DDD!!!! I swear! XD
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:28 pm (UTC)
thank you. i hope to post more sections.
lil miss sunshineaudacitas on November 7th, 2006 02:33 pm (UTC)
I love your description! <333

This is like the best fic that I've read in such a long time. XD And usually, I hate celebrity fics. But this is a real exception. :)
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 03:30 pm (UTC)
thank you. i'm hoping to make this less of a celebrity fic and more of a... character driven fic who just happen to be real people. the club that i chose is a real one...although i've not been there myself... i want to bring a sense of realism to a piece.

i'm using these pieces to stretch my brain back into some semblance of order so i can get back to writing.

with any luck, i can continue the "voice" of this piece and make it enjoyable to all of you.
helloviola on November 7th, 2006 09:59 pm (UTC)
Can I just say that I am in love with this fanfic? *.* Seriously, I love your descriptions and I was hooked on the story line from the very first paragraph. I look forward to the following chapters =)
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 7th, 2006 10:17 pm (UTC)
thank you. i hope to have some time to work on it tonight.
[m8]: angle'scraftmickey8 on November 8th, 2006 05:35 am (UTC)
first of all..i wanna say this...


*runs off to read*
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 8th, 2006 05:45 am (UTC)
ah... i shall!
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wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 8th, 2006 08:55 pm (UTC)
i don't know how long the angst will last. it just seemed like a good place to start.
onepairofpantsonepairofpants on November 8th, 2006 08:53 pm (UTC)
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I usually don't like reading fics like this, fics that seem, (I hope you don't mind me saying this) darker. However your words drew me in and I had to continue.
wedspawn ♥wedspawn on November 8th, 2006 09:03 pm (UTC)
oh no, i admit... it is dark. actually it's lighter than what i usually write. just ask ranalore..i'm positively skipping through daisies and sunshine here :::::grins::

hopefully it'll lighten it as the story progresses.